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A Kentish Spring

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A Kentish Spring



Where I live it‘s winter now, many days are grey,
mornings when it’s white with frost, blow all the grey away.

To pull back blinds and see a crystal sky of sapphire blue
makes waking up a pleasure, but alas they are too few.

To herald spring the blossom trees are tipped in snowy white,
the buds stay tightly shut until the sun puts forth it’s light.

The threat of snow still lingers until Easter’s long since past,
daylight hours are growing, but the icy chill winds last.

Golden headed daffodils proclaim the rites of spring,
softest yellow catkins in gentle breezes swing.

Fields are being planted with the first of this years crop,
the certain sounds of coppicing, the thump as branches drop.

Offspring of the rams and ewes gambol in the field,
hops they’ll soon be stringing to give us this years yield.

Apples from the orchard in a sweetened pastry pie,
with a pint of Kentish ale, a pleasure to the eye.

If on a cold and chilly day you visit rural Kent,
a quick meal in a friendly pub will end a trip well spent.
 
 
 
 


 

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I live in a place called Southborough, in the county of Kent, England.

This is also a special poem for a fellow poet Tercarro. Terry I wrote this for you as a taste of 'home'.

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  • Sgt. Pepper
    March 29

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    haha good poem, good ending, i dont think there is anything like a good pint of ale in our cold british winters!


  • Suzianne
    August 14, 2008

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    Congratulations!

    Enjoy the gold...I enjoyed every line of your poem. You did a nice job of bringing the sense of place alive.


  • Suzianne
    August 10, 2008
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    Nicely done...

    This certainly gives a glimpse of rural Lent. I can almost taste the apple pie and ale.


  • fantasysmurf
    March 15, 2008

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    A picture made from words

    Spring definitely sprung in my head as I read your poem.  Spring is my favourite time of year, and it just isn't spring if there aren't any lambs or daffodils! So their inclusion painted your place in a poem very well. My favourite lines are:
    "To herald spring the blossom trees are tipped in snowy white,
    the buds stay tightly shut until the sun puts forth it’s light."

  • Judith Chandler
    March 5, 2008

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    I love this. Just a couple of questions about wording. Actually I figured out "stringing" of hops, that is sort of obvious. But coppicing? Does that pertain to roof? rooves?

  • Tercarro
    February 25, 2008

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    Home sick

    This is lovely and made me home sick which of course it would. So many wonderful discriptions to make my mouth water and my heart ache. "Golden headed daffodils proclaim the rites of spring,
    softest yellow catkins in gentle breezes swing", there is nowwhere I know better than England to see those daff's push themselves up to the sky and shout that spring is here. "Offspring of the rams and ewes gambol in the field, hops they’ll soon be stringing to give us this years yield". Don't you just love to see those pastoral scenes of sheep and lambs in the warm sunshine surrounded by quiet green fields where the only sound to hear is the skylark up above. And those hops, what a glorious sight. "Apples from the orchard in a sweetened pastry pie, with a pint of Kentish ale, a pleasure to the eye". No one, not anyone can tell me that there is a better place to have a pint that at home in an English pub. You certainly captured everything with this one. A very Wordsworth feel to it. One more thing I love about Kent is those brilliant misty mornings when you look across the county and the mist hides all but the church steeples and the odd chimney that smokes quietly in the distance telling you that someone is home in a nice warm space hidden as they are beneath a blanket of mist all safe and sound.
    Thank you for this work and for thinking of me so far from home. Apple pie and custard, Hmmmm I'm hungry now.
    Loved this one.
    TC


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    February 24, 2008

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    Very well written I like this.
    Thank you for taking the time to enter this poem into my contest I wish you the best of luck with it


  • moonbumps silver member
    February 22, 2008

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    MMmmmmmmm apple pie and Kentish ale-YUM! You make it all sound so scrummy-every exquisite line!!! Loved it all-good luck my sweet Sunshine xxxxxx Moonie


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    February 22, 2008

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    That was so descriptive Sue... I really feel like a had a peek into life there... just lovely! You always weave together such great words and flawless rhyme, that it takes you on a little trip in your mind. Great work!


  • Lily of the Valley
    February 21, 2008

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    I'm in my car and on my way. A Kent pub lunch will go down a treat, even if it nearly midnight lol. Perhaps Kent has had the gloomy weather because apart form one day this week we've basked in glorious sunshine and at 20deg, it's even been warm enough to have lunch in the garden. I like the feel of spring you create in this poem. The crisp frosty mornings are a delightful sight to me and I like to see the steam rise as the sun melts into a warm day in the garden. As you say, many bulbs are up and beginning to flower and the blossom on my trees has just opened. It's a wonderful sight to warm the heart. Good luck in the contest


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    February 21, 2008
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    i love lambs gamboling,, and daffodils,,good luck to you for this fine piece xxx pp


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    February 21, 2008

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    Awesome--"As Usual"

    You Know What, Kid??--I'm getting tired of saying all the same things about your poetry being awesome--well-wriiten--well-versed--Beautiful--Picturesque-etc. etc. etc.---But, You leave me no choice---They are all these things and beyond!!


  • arafura gold member
    February 21, 2008

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    "Golden headed daffodils proclaim the rites of spring,
    softest yellow catkins in gentle breezes swing..."

    Love work my friend. Great descriptive passages and stunning imagery. Good luck in the contest!


  • Puppydog gold member
    February 21, 2008

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    HEAVENLY!!!!

    Reading this just brings Kent right into my day.'s It sounds so lovely's

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