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Nature's beauty

I love the sight of nature
its beauty makes me smile
I hear the birds
they chirp away
I'll listen for a while
I see the dew upon the grass
so early in the morn
and see stars twinkle in the sky
the world is made adorn
there's pretty flowers over there
getting watered by the hose
and scents of lilacs fresh
float up into my nose
I have to say it blows my mind
to see God's work be done
for without His creative niche
nature would be none
so when you see the sun
or birds fly up above
just know it all was made
by God's unending love.

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  • PatheticKt
    August 20

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    A simple poem and quite lovely I was actually hoping that the imagery would be a little bit deeper so that the reader can feel the words in his/her senses.
    Other than that, I love the theme since it is true in my opinion; this poem was quite refreshing, all right


  • doolie gold member
    February 10

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    This is a lovely poem. Congrats on the gold trophy. Well done.


  • daviscth silver member
    February 10

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    This is such a beautiful feel-good poem. The words are so pretty and make me long for Spring time to hurry up. Thank you for sharing with me.

    • sunflowers21573
      February 10
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      I felt the inspiration to write this poem because all things created by God are special and unique and need to be appreciated. I agree with you, it does make u want to have springtime get here in a hurry lol. Thank u for commenting


  • Memoirs of a Girl
    January 15
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    I'm not too fond of religious or rhyming poetry, and here you have both! However, I think you have done this piece in a way that is neither offensive or forceful in your beliefs, the way so much religious poetry is done.
    This is such a peaceful and tranquil piece. It is truly beautiful and uplifting.

    Great write and thanks for entering!
    ~Memoirs


  • Autumn Whisper
    September 30, 2008

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    Beautiful poem! The rhyming was really good, and I enjoyed every last line. Wonderful. Good luck in the contest
    best wishes as always
    Autumn Whisper


  • FunnelWaxFate
    July 10, 2008

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    Ah! Such a comforting, tranquil, and pristine write, so eloquent! This definitely instills a bit of a vibrant flutter in the heart; arouses the somnolent wonder that lies within, so often made dormant by the distractions of society. Oh yes, the imagery is brilliant. Mornings of this nature are the kind that paralyze the breath and widen the eyes that lead into the soul. It is most captivating. Definitely places a deep calmness within the reader, replaces anxiety and fear and trepidation with awe, inspiration, and security. I especially loved the lines, “I hear the birds
    they chirp away/I'll listen for a while/I see the dew upon the grass/so early in the morn/and see stars twinkle in the sky” Oh yes, very beautiful! Well done!!!!

  • piccola silver member
    June 3, 2008
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    This has a lovely rhyme and flow. I also love the theme. Great work, thank you for entering.


  • earthstar
    May 29, 2008

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    very lovely thoughts. Ever thing made by God love.It gives a peace feeling among you words.
    it has very lovely thoughts and wisdom. thank yo for entering my contest


  • walkinthereign
    May 17, 2008

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    simple

    This poem is very simple and beautiful. You talk about nature as a little child would with innocence and fascination! Well Done!


  • Swan song gold member
    March 26, 2008
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    Lovely

    This was a very uplifting poem. with excellent imagery something to think ABOUT.


  • Angel Of Heaven99
    March 7, 2008
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    very very nice!


  • Blooming Poet
    March 3, 2008

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    Nature's beauty shines through in ths poem. I am glad you apprreciate God and all the great things he does for us eveeryday. Even the things we take for granted like natures beauty


  • Candy6
    March 2, 2008
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    This nature poem is beautiful.

    • sunflowers21573
      March 2, 2008
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      God does such wonderous things here on earth. I am glad you liked this poem. Hope you have a beautiful day

  • Harbinger of Death
    February 29, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my contest. The images of gods world that you explained are descriptive and well put


    • sunflowers21573
      March 1, 2008
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      So glad you liked my write. i just felt compelled to write this piece. Nature is such a blessing.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    February 24, 2008

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    Excellent write this is great.
    Thank you for taking the time to enter this poem into my contest I wish you the best of luck with it

    • sunflowers21573
      February 25, 2008
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      Thank you for the critique you gave me on my poem. Any input is truly appreciated. I thank you for giving my work a chance in your contest. I hope you have a great day!

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