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orchestrating the Heavenly Cacophony, Allegro



mine:
flute

yours:
intimately playing... ahmmm...
lips


Author notes

guitar - or is it passion in exactly 6.25 words?

(inspired by nicolette's contest - "finger music: strings". well, after exactly 100, 50, 25 and 12.5 words, that same someone very dear to me told me that if i don’t repeat it in 6.25 words i’m as good as talentless. hey, i won’t let anyone goad me into proving anything. proof? here i am with 6.25 words yet no guitar, he he. you don’t see the erotica? and you maintain you are above 18, huh? : ) : ) : ) )

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  • Nicolette gold member
    February 21, 2008

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    I so love it when a poet is as inspired as you are, Joe....play on....this one made me smile....so graphic, yet so very subtle - excellent!!

    ~ Nicolette


  • Sonja
    February 21, 2008
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    Just wonder... if I would comment this one... Sealed Embarassed

    ~Sonja~