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Don't You Ever Forget About Me (A Thanks For Everything Poem)

Don't you forget about me
On your journey
To become a better you
You chose this path
To cure yourself
Of some misleading deeds
So don't you ever forget about me

I held your hand
I held it tight
Your song was rough
But with my help
You made it right
I fixed your loose ends
On your soul
So that you live
A happy life
Not a lie
So don't you ever forget about me

Right now
I wish I hadn't been so selfish
I wish I had the eyes to see what had been wrong
I loved you
In the wrong way
But then you came
And helped me with everything I did

You held my hand
You held it tight
My song was rough
But with your help
I made it right
You fixed my loose ends
On my soul
So that I could live
A happy life
Not a lie
So I'll never forget about you

So don't you forget about me

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  • ClandestineDreams
    February 26, 2008
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    I swear if i cry i will scream at you. top making me emotional chlo. Good write though


  • Deathwolf Tasagka
    February 21, 2008
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    Aww this is soo sad but deep with a emotional love and for the loss as well. i love it its really good with its moral with the title and stayed with a steady beautiful flow. great write here just simply amazing in scripture and texting both within irony and moral and life and Love. great breautiful write.

    sincerely,
    Lonelywolf tasagka


    • RebelliousKiss
      February 22, 2008
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      Thanks. I feel sad so thats the mood my poetry will be for a while. I love your comments, anyway. You're so positive. I love that about you. Anyway, thanks again.

      -Chloe