lead me

I've travelled to the somewhere
that is formidable
and even to that which is obscene
endlessly seeking still
an iridescent flicker
a tiny glowing scribble
perhaps faded in time
on these cavernous walls
which might lead me
to the divine... that is you

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Contest
Word Bank: Formidable, somewhere, faded, divine, traveled, scribbled, cavernous, iridescent, flicker, still, seeking
10 lines only

A contest entry

Word Bank Wknd-10/10/20 by Gypsie Ink. 300 points, ended February 25, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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By me, right now

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Gypsie Ink
February 25, 2008
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Captivating!
That which we endure for love...Best of luck in the contest.
celadia
February 23, 2008

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This was interesting even if I didn't quite understand it, I'll have to read it over and over to do so I imagine.