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Winter Days (Triquain)

Winter days
Have finally approached
There is such a cold chill in the air
I have you by my side to always keep me warm
The children, they love to play outside
Take their crazy carpets
Go sliding.

Copyright Cynthia Jones
Jan.5/2008

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  • ckwriter69
    February 27, 2008

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    Excellent write Cynthia. I really enjoy this form now that I tried one. Its cold here in Iowa but I can only imagine how mucher colder it is in Canada, brrrrrrrr. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.


  • captain howdy
    February 26, 2008
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    hmm. I have never tried that, but it sounds quite fun! Great poem!