Days of yore, how I remember
Memory, somehow faded in timbre
A cavernous heart on either side
Flicker grown fire within each abide
Seeking, she, love most divine
Formidable soul to make planets align
Seeking, he, a mate less traveled
To cast-on yarn in a life unravelled
Memories made to ever renew
Lovers still to this day true.
A contest entry
- Word Bank Wknd-10/10/20 by Gypsie Ink.
300 points, ended February 25, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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a good pice of poetry, a soft and sensual sound tomy ear as i read it aloud sat here, it flowed well, no interuptions at all
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Thank you so much for the compliment!
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Nice
"to make planets align" I like that. Best of luck in the contest. -
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Thank you and thanks for an interesting contest. Congrats to the winner!
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