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Within The Shadow



In the shadow of a statue that was cast within her womb
Did the darkness make her heart become an empty tomb
Hail Mary so full of grace with such a sadness in her face
Could she feel the cold dead air that fills that empty place

Flesh and blood of earthly clay made with fragile bone
A mortal mix that yielded an image in hallowed stone
It stands in cemeteries and adorns the naves of church
A powerful image that mankind cannot easily besmirch

With a somber countenance and with arms outstretched
While a promise of life everafter on his face is etched
Many worship within the shadows devoid of a holy glow
Since that day of agony that a mother should never know

Within infinite shadows each no deeper than the other
the sacrifice of the Son and the anguish of the Mother

Author notes

I normally stay away from spiritual writings, it sometimes is too emotional for some to be indifferent about something so casually written, but the image is what inspired this poem.

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  • penman gold member
    March 11, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and well done. Such a terrific write.


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    February 23, 2008

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    Wonderful write, your flow is dead-on and your words are perfect. Best of luck in the contest.


    whisper


  • suseann
    February 21, 2008
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    Those last two lines are powerhouse indeed. Such bonds through anything will survive.Lovely piece.


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    February 21, 2008

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    And a lovely inspiration it was. Dark and yet so beautiful to read...fits the pic so very well! Thanks for the entry and best of luck!

    Az