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Why did you kill me

why did you kill me
when all I did was love you
care for you
why me
when it could of been another girl
I want to be free
and be a girl
but you stabbed me
when I wrote words that said you killed me
why did you kill me
when you could of just killed yourself

can someone help me

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  • Feirce.Dino
    March 16, 2008
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    I Loves It XD


  • Kelli Marie
    March 4, 2008

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    A profound piece of poetry. There is a lot of pain and emotion in this piece. Very well written. Good job.
    Kelli


  • Lost Emo
    February 21, 2008
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    wow very powerful. loved the read