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I Wanted To Say


She is my inspiration
When I’m out walking all alone
I know that she waits at home
Setting up in loving preparation
She always dances in my mind
My thoughts of her are so kind
She is the heart of consummation
She takes all of my love
My baby coos just like a dove
She’s the purpose of my creation
She’s the home of my heart
She is my darling work of art
She moves me into elation
So I write this song of love
For my sweet little angel dove
She is my one and only infatuation
Her words could make me cry
Without her love I’d surely die
She is my loving fascination
She can take me to the skies
I get so lost inside her eyes
She is my loving sensation
She occupies my nights
She does everything just right
She is the heart of all perfection
So I wrote this song to say
That I love you baby, all the way



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  • ForeverFarAway
    February 22, 2008

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    Nice but you need to divide certain parts up
    Otherwise it's really good
    Goodluck in my contest!
    xxx
    Eli