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Wings

Let the blood
That courses through my veins
Run faster
Run thicker
Run down along my skin

For growth is nothing
But attachment to my past
DIe now
Die later
Die to keep me free

Now the wind
It sets in like a hurricane
Blow through my hair
Blow into my face
Blow to set me into flight

So now I spread my wings
And wait.

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  • Justin3
    August 27, 2008
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    This poem has great form, it really makes room for all the feelings it expresses.Great work!