Splendor amongst the eras
only witnessed by the fallen
Those who obtain no acclaim
carried by wings of flawless diamonds
coating the angels heavenly song
Author notes
Contest-Riftkin
Prompt-- Angel Wings
25 words more or less
A contest entry
- 25 words PIF by Riftkin.
475 points, ended February 22, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ANYTHING SHORT by Blooming Poet.
400 points, ended March 7, 2008, 105 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PRE WRITE QU ICK- IES by Luminescence.
300 points, ended March 14, 2008, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Celticmoon's and Leander's glue a trophy on my Prewrite by leander.
800 points, ended March 27, 2008, 74 entries
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When you're given the prompt of 'Angel Wings', then it's not that easy to try and avoid cliché. This poem isn't bad at all, but it rather leans to that side of poetry in my opinion.
Thank you for entering the contest
I wish you all the best!
Leander -
This seems familiar to me somehow. Maybe I read it before earlier. Hmm, anyway, I really love it, it held me captive. A beautiful poem.
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I can see angels singng at the feet of the fallen, that takes skill to get that kind of iimagery going on. Thanks again you used flawless diamonds, still love it.
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love your take in this. thank you for entering. Best wishes in my contest. Riftkin
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Thank you very much!
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