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Fire and Freedom

Alone one night in a misty forest
The fire was lit by a true fairy light
She was born in the flame of life and love
Signifying the love of ones true light

She formed a staff made of fire that burned
For one that she felt would find the world worth
Alone in the night she fled then that dear place
And stole alone into darkness of my memory bank

She hid away falling and dieing
Her light is waning
And I can't relight it

Falling away I can feel her now
As I dance in this light of forest fire
Alone in the darkness she lit that light
Of love and romance with passion of the fight.

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http://cosmosue.deviantart.com/art/Fire-Dance-68883302

Above is the photo that was given in this contest... hope everyone enjoys my poem!

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 23, 2008

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    Passionate. I adore the passion that spills from this and envokes deep feelings and imagery within me.
    I see it all like a silent movie.
    Wonderful write


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