No memories can simply soar
evaporating without a trace;
no thoughts die soundlessly
within dry parchment of disguise.
The pierced heart is alert
and wide awake -
a tiger
throating a horrendous roar ...
Then pulse
becomes a pincette
picking splinters from the blood
glueing puzzle pieces
to murals of the mind:
On that day
love's white diamond turned to quartz;
no daintiness or niceties
could stop the self-destructive blow
which ripped love
from dejection's fragile grip.
That was the blaze
that burned the bridal gown
to dust;
that was the hour of defeat
when blue doves turned to pimpernel;
that was the day which marked
the raven's ruthless claws;
the calligraphy on the wall
a private war
within the core.
One needs
some burning Truths
to cauterise life's wounds;
one needs
some facts to feed a stubborn soul -
the interceptor of those inert sparks;
one needs
good memories of stars.
One needs
Love's Crest of Hope.
myra
25.11.2003
Author notes
To survive this life one needs Faith in Love's Hope ...
Written November 25th, 2003
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excellent
What a great poem. Full of metaphors that build the picture.
I don't think i have read you before, but now i shall be checkinh you out more often
hugs
jan -
love that is reversed spells evol which is close enough to what's is wicked....but what love has wrought in the hearts of all is beyond any poet's aspirations yet still we strive to catch it's elusiveness on the tipof a pen
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the imagery you use in this write really shines a bright light on the subject, illuminating and made so clear.
two verses that are so outstanding in their originality and impact are: "That was the blaze that burned the bridal gown to dust" and "One needs some burning Truths to cauterise life's wounds" what powerful powerful imagery in these words. they speak volumes to the heart.
wonderful poem!
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Such a beautiful way with words, this is. You are a very wise person
I admire that you can focus on the up's in life as well as the downs, and take lessons from each. If only we all saw things in that light.
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Truth and depth.. I adored this piece. It's moving, and so beautiful
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Thank you, dearest Jen ... for all the nuances in your comment ... I've noticed ...
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this is wonderfully writen. but I didnt expect to see less
and its nice to read and actually have time to comment and enjoy the poetry for a change. I love the imagry in here, so many different directions my mind likes to go, and did.
lovely Miss Myrataal
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Jacqueline, how wonderful to have you back ... and yes, as always you just cut right to the bone: one never can survive on one's own. We NEED one another ... Thank you for reading my poetry and for understanding my heart.
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Dearest Gill - your comments always reflect that feelings which instigated the poem in the first place. Thank you for holding the mirror for me. I appreciate your caring spirit.
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Thank you, Cinara ... I appreciate your loyalty ... May I always be able to write my heart in crystal clear Truth ...
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Thank you, Debbie, for your very kind comment ... I appreciate each and every visit of you ... When are you posting a new poem?
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Thank you Cristos, for your comment ... I am grateful that my intense pain could instigate something creative and worthwhile ...
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Thank you, Dianne, for you sincere support. I remembered your words of love during the time of despair ...
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Ahh Poetess..such sadness and pain... Ink stains drip from a lonely pen..suspended in time,lost in emotion and commotion.. a wonderful write Myra.. as always ..uplifting at the end, offering hope to all who read
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Myra,
Reading your work is always a pleasure in unexpected and refereshing content and word choice. So descriptive and raw yet woundrous in its expression.
Superb, my friend
Elizabeth -
hi Myra!
this caused so many interesting images- the genius use of every single word is just another testimony to your matchless talent........
your work is always outstanding
the expressions of Myra.............. always an honor to read
stay strong in Him dear Myra
i will keep you in my prayers
deb
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Strong use of repetition, and (like a french chef) voila, on the use of vocabulary. Someone has been doing their homework. Hehe. Any who, I was struck with visions of stars, loving quarrellers, psychotic birds, and many a bright expensive gem (in many colors too) Just such a bright piece of work...even though the drab background is present, the piece adds light that is quite radiant. Such a subtle way to poise your points. wells written
Peace
chris -
My stomach is in turns, dear friend. It has given what love there was a crescendo, not an exit.....an altering, not a change....a place...not a pit. I am very sorry and proud of you at the same time!
Wonderful recording of such a time as this! Love and blessings,CookieZeal -
Dearest Brazos
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Baie geluk met jou verjaarsdag, Madelief ... 15 kersies: iiiiiiiiiiiiiii ... En een kersie kus: kiiiiiiiiiis
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excellent
Forgiveness, Faith, Hope....yes, Myra that is the path. I know you know it, because you said so. But I know, that following the correct path can be torturous and painful; denial is so much easier. Therein lies the demon....
Beautiful write, Myra. I am indeed regretful about your agony, but through your writings I know you to be a woman of much strength. You will pull through my friend, lighten your heart.
Brazos -
Thank you, my friend, for reading.
Right now I am struggling with personal agony ... I can only judge my own actions; not the behaviour of others. In the end forgiveness is the most important gateway to freedom ...
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This is so true... As dumb as it may sound, i really do relate to the feeling. I guess at one point in our lives, we must all doubt the existence of love. You put across a strong message about keeping the faith, which i find really important in a time like this. Thank you so much for sharing.
~Mada
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You've Blown us away again. Your truth has sunk deep and touched a feeling I have only ever watched. You have revealed what needed exposing, thank you for your talent. Yours always Rxxxx
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