She was gone; he took her in the blink of an eye.
Blind to the fact, he took my soul
and desire to live, along with her.
I transformed a barely functioning human being.
Mutated, not Cindy, days darkened.
Slowly pain faded, how, I do not know.
Soul realigning with body again.
My days brighter and
the river of tears finally in drought.
I figured I had my memories feel blessed, for that.
Author notes
im annoyed this is my one hundredth poem...it is worlds away from anything I would call good, but I glad it does express true emotion
In a list
A contest entry
- Quick Contest-10 lines- only 7 places. by lovelight05.
600 points, ended February 22, 2008, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - JUST TWO DAYS TO REACH 1000 ENTRIES !!!! ( BE A PART OF THIS RECORD BREAKING CONTEST ) by Alex Hex.
300 points, ended May 1, 2008, 526 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Friends welcome by Riftkin.
500 points, ended June 8, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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It might be miles away my dear
but there is pure emotion here
something that still shows
in all your works.
Riftkin
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, thank you so much
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bad memories
Hello there, Sis!
I'm pleased that this poem is based way back in your past and only memories of it remain. It looks as if you have recovered from this painful and mysterious experience. I get the feeling that it's about the loss of somebody very close to you, someone who you loved very much. canb't quite figure out who it was though, as I couldn't find clues about that. Not that it matters, as iot's the loss and grief which is the important thing oin this decimal poem.
Congratulations on your award.
have a gr8 day,
BJ.
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Thanks Bro
It is a memories only remain..and I try my best for them to always be the happy ones
It is about my mother, who passed almost 8 years ago.
Thank you for a wonderufl comment
Ur SiS
Cindy
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Congrats on the silver!
This is a sad piece, I like the happier ending but still, very sorrowful to read. You have penned a great piece here...again Congrats on the trophy...very well earned
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Thank you so muc
I was flattered to win lol.
I enjoy writing about the loss of my mum but taking it through to the fact that im happy now, aceepting of it etc
CIndy
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Aww this is sad sis! But I'm glad it ended on a happier note... so hard to lose someone you love!!
Felt it!
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Thanks SiS
Cin
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sad sissy
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Thank you darl
Love U too
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Oh what a wonderful poetic write and for a quickee contest wow amazing!
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Thank you, wasnt easy to sqeeze into ten lines lol
Cindy
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amazingly sad. thanks for sharing.
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Thank you
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