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This I Swear

You fill my heart with joy
And my world with laughter
And I knew from the start
I would always love you and no other

I will spend each day making sure
You know how much you mean to me
I would give every last breath
To spend a second in your arms

I will wake you every day with love
And stand by your side forever
I will hold you always
And never let you forget the beauty you possess

I will spend my days
Making sure you're happy and full of joy
Laughter will ring from every corner
Each day will be like heaven on earth

For you are my Life
You hold my heart
To you I give my whole world
With a promise to love you forever 

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My wedding vows for my love

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  • Honeydew
    February 29, 2008

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    beautiful

    this is really beautiful...i did notice in stanza 4...that you should possably be your..i really enjoyed this read..a very lovely vow indeed..thank you for entering my contest.


  • Lexie - gold member
    February 22, 2008

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    Baby

    I'm crazy in love with you
    till death do us part isnt enough time,
    i'll love you for eternity,
    your my heart and soul


  • Amera gold member
    February 21, 2008

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    It’s been awhile since I have read your love poetry and I realize now what I have been missing. This is beautiful. You have taken the love poem to a new level by showing your dedication to your lover and not just describing your feelings like most love poems.

    Love,
    Amera♥