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Pallete





You painted my soul on corners of wind,
colours tide tunes in sweet melodies,
a support of brush to breathe afresh
by whitewashing of words on wall of days.

Between our bodies, a slow interval
of low tide escorts well of rocky rainbows,
enhancing to want more in inventing
your's to fill my empty pallete.

My old defect of plunging
in borders of love to look for you
for courses I did not even know.

To my count, brought the sea inside me
to empty my conch in time of origin
to hear surging, not to smell the sea.








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  • RainbowGirl257
    February 21, 2008

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    i like the style you have written your poem in! its really nice and i liked the first stanza best.
    well done and good luck