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Etched in the lines of a rainbow

Flaunting butterflies engrave their presence,
they keep her company while she works.
This enchantress of emerald and rich rhinestone.
Mallow pink curls softly caress her mantle.
She is etched in all the lines of the rainbow.
Mistress of adrianople red and gobelin blue,
after nature has washed herself with God's tears,
she coats the world in colored gelatin
                                                        and all seem a little brighter.

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  • carole21
    March 10, 2008

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    colorful

    colorful write for the prompt . . liked "This enchantress of emerald and rich rhinestone" and "after nataure has washed herself with God's tears" . . hopeful ending is nice . .


  • Sandygram
    February 23, 2008

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    This was such a pretty poem to read this morning. So delightful. It sure made me smile. Thank you for sharing the colors of the rainbow with us. Lovely poem!!! Take care, Sandy


  • RainbowGirl257
    February 21, 2008

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    hmm.. very good indeed,
    although you'll have to explain to me what adrianople means! lol
    very good, with good vocab.