Hallmark cards are penned,
as the love is for anyone.
Can you believe that!
Love being for anyone
but you. I tear up the card,
for it doesn't mean much.
I'll write you a letter with
personal touch. Please know,
that ill show you a love,
so true, it speaks to you
from the page. An image
so bold, you wont need to be told.
That who you are, is beautiful.
Love reigns true for your
heart is mine, no-one else's.
Save me from the dark.
Your love will save me
from intimately destroying
my soul. Its you who truly
makes me whole.
Hold me, feel
me, touch me
love me.
Our love will grow as a seed.
As we share our lives, the need
to grow will flow, with beauty.
Unquestionably pushing out the ground,
for all to see. Then we, will be
in the mighty world. Growing
till the end of the earth.
A love so strong, it lifts the curse
off mankind. To know of a tree,
so graceful and true.
Inspiration running the shrewd.
Our love will be the example
that all will aspire for.
Our desire, Our love
will stand forever in virtue.
Standing the test of time as a statue.
Please take me,
under your wing.
Please believe me,
i wont sting.
Only desire, to be
your love.
Don't fly away,
i love you.
Its all true.
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A contest entry
- Prove Me Wrong: Make Me Believe in It Again~A Dare with Big points!~ by Hetha.
1500 points, ended March 7, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A Lovers Question by DrkPoet.
450 points, ended March 12, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Be Yourself Be Honest Be Happy by P. W. Blackwell.
375 points, ended March 30, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i like it it is a very nicly writen poem
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This is filled with wonderful imagery of what love should be. Not just a sentiment, this blooms on the page. thank you for your entry and good luck.
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Such powerful sentiments, your words along with the picture gave me a visual of love as it starts to bloom and then takes root and becomes a mighty tree. You painted a really nice image with this, thanks for sharing.
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hey
that was wonderful i loved it alot
do u hve a girlfriend is that why u write such beautyful poetry.
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lol nah i dont have a girlfriend
but thanks for the complement. i write how i feel, and i have a strong connection with who i am as a person.
im glad you enjoyed this one too
jezz
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wow I was looking at this constest and saw this. Its beauitful, powerful, and capivating. I loved it. I only hope I could bring something as beauitful to the table and hope the world might turn a head to see its greatness. your writting reminds me of my own just better...
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