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who needs you?while he's here

He wonders
and I wonder too
what his words do to me
my feelings are back
to melt the rock he managed
I wonder am I back?
did he fill my heart's crack?
I wonder why I numb
why I think
why I dream
I wonder why his words touch my heart
shake my soul
I've heard them before
but why now?
why his words
why is all this happening
where am I heading?
is it an end
or a new begining
am I running to it
or escaping from it
I wonder why
I feel like a teenager
hearing her first lines of flirting
I wonder why
I can't say goodbye?
is this the love I lost?
I'm confused
scared
but it doesn't matter
cause these feelings
are worth keeping
my heart deserves to keep beating
don't you think?
well
I do
and as he says
who are you after all?
enough for me
how he sees me
how he sees my beauty
how he lists it
so who needs you?

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  • lake of dremas
    February 21, 2008
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    nice

    really liked this sweet poem. it tells us about a soul confused between love and not love.. afraid in a way... of any further step. but in a way you seem not to be convinced by him.. as you're las line: who are you after all? who needs you? which make the poem a bit non romance.
    because when we love we're convinced that we love. good luck in your life.