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alls a bloom

gray skies
fades into
shades of  blues

green  buds growing
all anew

dogwood trees
all come to life

spring is such
a pretty sight






 

 

Author notes

the view of spring
is so beautiful
as winter grays fade and
spring shows its grace
as an artist

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  • penman gold member
    March 31, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Great take on the picture. So very well done. Thank you for sharing.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 21, 2008

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    awww this is beautiful I love it I can't wait for spring to show its true colors lol Good luck with this and thanks for the comment


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    March 3, 2008

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    i love this. it is simple and pure. you make me want spring to be here all the more!!!!!


  • Florida Sunshine
    February 25, 2008

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    Short and sweet ~ and too the point ~ your poem put a smile on my face ~ Thanks for entering ~ best of luck to you ~


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    Beautifully Weaved~

    I'm looking forward to spring, no doubt!
    Thanks for sharing such an inspirational piece

    Much love and light.
    -Timothy


  • Dygurl
    February 25, 2008
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    true indeed, a very ybright write.


  • Angel Wings1960
    February 24, 2008
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    THis gives me something to look forward to. I love spring


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    February 24, 2008

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    This is such a lovely poem with so much wonderful imagery. WEll done, you have painted such a lovely picture in my mind.


  • SchizoChic
    February 23, 2008
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    Beautiful guided imagery.


  • ravensgift
    February 22, 2008
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    a beautiful poem from a beautiful lady.


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    February 22, 2008
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    lovely and good luck an innocent beauty here xx hugs pp


  • tawk gold member
    February 22, 2008

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    Such a beautiful write of Spring. Full of amazing imagery. I can't wait for Spring to get here Good luck in the contest my friend


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    February 21, 2008

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    Very sweet! I know the feeling. Spring awakening to us is such a delight - a canvas of exquisite creations painted by the Divine. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and best wishes in the contest!

  • Bob Fox
    February 21, 2008
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    Tis spring

    And for sure is beautiful. But then comes that oppreesive heat. please make spring stay


  • SilverButterfly gold member
    February 21, 2008

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    awwwe...this has put a smile on my face this morning!

    I love spring! I love dogwoods especially.
    When I see new buds coming to life, I am reminded of Christ, when He said "I make all things new again"!!!

    BEAUTIFUL WRITE... MY FRIEND!!


    • raggyann
      February 21, 2008
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      thanks to all of you who have comments on this poem much love to each of you


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    February 21, 2008

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    This is such a beautiful piece of writing here. Wonderful imagery just brought the poem to life in my mind. Fantastic. Well done Raggy.

    Beautiful piece indeed.
    Love always
    Wayne Leon

    xxx

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