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love

Oh, love come not my way
Though your strength comforts many,
Your sting leaves as many
In the oblivion of dismay.

Oh, love your strength is as of death,
Though you never meet.
Though eccentric in beauty,
You blind as the moonless mid-night sky.

Oh, oh, love come not my way,
Many long for you, so seek their way,
But my glass-heart dare not way-lay,
For in the Elysium of ‘lovelessnes’ I’ll stay

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    February 26, 2008
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    Very nice work here

    But my glass heart dare not way-lay
    For in the Elysium of 'lovliness' I'll stay

  • paula.e
    February 21, 2008

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    Should run as far as i can from u and warn all those who dare to love or even have any affection for you. I like the comparisons though