Hovering under angel wings
You lift me through my dreams
Carrying me to my destination
My rock , my friend
One I can always count on
Like watching the stars shine
Just as reliable
Wings wrapped around me
You cradle my heart
Angels eyes
Gaze at me as I walk
Within your heart
Warm & safe
I like in you
No matter where I am
Your carry me
On your angels wings
Author notes
this poem is foe one of my best friends ( greg) who is always here when i need him i love you hunni
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Beautiful dedication
Words that cme from the heart but are written with great imagery formed so well
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The is a really beautiful poem, and very well done. I liked how all of the groupings have a different number of lines. Normally that distracts me, but that is if there is just one that is off, not all of them. It is a really sweet poem. You need to work on the third line. It is not very clear and understandable, but I don't think it would take you much time to fix it. Really well done.
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beautiful dedication poem to a wonderful friend. love you always ~auntie~
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