I love you I hate it
I want you but wish I didn’t
You’re my addiction im your slave
In this world that I crave
Push me up or push me down
I am a tragic its so clear
Cold to the touch
you’ll never understand
Me and my addiction
Im its biggest fan
Though I loath it the same
It calls out my name
that’s it times up
I stand here alone
My case is closed
I let it get the best of me
I love you I hate it
I want you but wish I didn’t
Alone and scared
For death is closer
My dreams far away
Not even god could fix this doll
Nor the devil want this girl
She nothing, she trash
She’s forever alone at last
Cold to the tough
She wounded away
Alone in the room
She will never be ok!
Author notes
I am ok just a heads up just the old me and my old ways running through my mind!
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I absolutely love the line "I love you I hate it" well put. Glad you pulled out too. A lot of people can relate to the girl in the corner
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great write love,
keep up the good work
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thanks bunches for takeing time to read, glade you liked it
love lots as well,
endless
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Really good.
this poem is soo good. I like all the emotions that went into it. i like the line, "i love you but wish i didnt." i feel the same way about the main guy i write about. i know someone that writes about some of the same kinds of things you do you should check her out. her username is fire demon. i don't remember if anything is capitalized. but still you would probly like her poems. -
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I'm very into your writes, it's so cool to see you grow in the right direction. I'm very proud of you, and though I've told ya this many times, get used to reading my words that flow sincere for a wonderful daughter in you I find so dear. Good right, shows others you've been there, and the author's notes tell you're now back.
Love ya my lil girl.
Dad. xo
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Wow this is really good, took me to a cold place and made me think of the old me as well. I'm glad you're ok now. Great write
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i really like this poem.
not sure what draws me to it but it i like it.
it's like pretty but sad at the same time.
to me at least. lol : -
what a cold place you took me to in this work. Reeeeally sad.
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greatness
this really reminds me of me i hope ur ok much love
Ali
P.S 2 FREAKIN CLEAN DAYS!!! -
first off - i'm realy lad you're ok now and your ove this.
thi is very moving, and rather bleak but well written. good job!
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