This pain I feel
I can no longer hide
Makes me so weak
My soul cries out,
HELP ME!
Author notes
Guess it has a lot to do with my mood 'n how I feel...but I looked at this and instantly saw pain.
In a list
A contest entry
- 10/20/25 QUICKIE! by Nighttime angel.
465 points, ended February 21, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Well, what do you think?
Comments
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You gotta let it out sometime or another...and its better letting out then keeping it in cause after a while all of it just piles up and it gets worse..but I love u sis...<3


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Oh yes! There is a lot of pain in that god awfully disturbing yet captivating pic!
I like what you did with the prompt... but I feel sad that you feel this way sweetheart.


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I liked the ending, really strong. Best of luck to you in the contest!
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Don't feel this way love!!! We are all here for you... I hear your cries and I am here to listen
Best of luck in the contest, you did a wonderful job


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you did a great job on this prompt. I can relate to all of this... our feelings are so important..
excellent job.
good luck
kat


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