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Lost in Emotion

Happy or sad,
scared or assured.
How am I supposed to feel,
when my life is a roller coaster?

We're together then we're not,
fighting then laughing.
What is going on,
how do I know what to expect?

Crying then smiling,
yelling then singing.
What's coming next,
on this crazy adventure?

When I'm with you,
I'm lost in emotion.
Never knowing how to feel,
or what you'll say about it.

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  • Kelli Marie
    April 9, 2008

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    Very nice. Our emotions can go so whacky that we get lost on our way through life. One thing...this line.."yelling the singing" do you mean then?
    Kelli


    • ChrissyJean
      April 10, 2008
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      Oops sorry. Typo. Its supposed to be "yelling then singing"


  • individuality gold member
    April 9, 2008

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    ah the crazy rollercoaster of life, fasten your seatbelt and make sure you keep your dinner down because it is going to be a mad fast ride. a good poem.


  • endless-lover silver member
    April 9, 2008

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    yes that is life my dear
    a crazy never ending ride
    but it is not so bad [at times]
    loved the poem