A light flickers
and it becomes dark.
My mind clouded
by unwelcomed thoughts.
"Suicide the final answer."
I wonder why
the higher power
has forgotten me.
I've lost myself
and He can't see me.
I drown in my beer
hoping to be found.
"Dear God,
My anger
towards you
can't find words."
Broken down
in tears
of remberence,
I wonder why
the higher power
has forgotten me.
Did I do
something wrong?
Am I worthless
in your eyes?
"Dear God,
I need you."
A contest entry
- God, grief, and everything in-between. by be a circle.
450 points, ended February 25, 2008, 8 entries
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Dang, you're madder than even me... I think He's still watching, though I question his tactics. Cool thing is, He needs you, too. Thanks for making me think.
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you are welcome
i like to make ppl think when they read what i write... I pride myself on my writings and to know my writings make ppl think about stuff is a good thing so thank you too
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very honest. I liked it. thanks for entering, and best of luck!
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