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Winding Road



      Life's a long and winding road
      It leads to everywhere,
      All the friends you haven't met,
      New cultures that are there.

      Fresh people in most places,
      Reminders of our past.
      Hope that our frustrations
      Will move away at last.

      Walk with me along this track
      The sunshine on your face,
      Leave the shadows far behind,
      Just set a steady pace.

      Enjoy the path you travel,
      Rest often on the way,
      Give all the joys of friendship
      To someone you meet today.

      If I gave away all I have
      I'm still in debt, you see,
      To those I met along the way
      Who gave so much to me.

We all travel, for work, play, holidays, or just for interest sake.

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  • condor gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    Beautiful. Just a delight to read. The flow was so steady. Love the third verse especially. This poem gives me a feeling of serenity, of being on a stroll through a park or dusty road surrounded by trees. I am glad i came across this one and you put it back. Do you have them in a folder close by? I keep all my poems on my mammoth drive and on a disk. Great one with no need to change anything.


    • rbruce gold member
      October 17, 2008
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      I store my stuff on an internet site as draft. That means it can't be seen by all and sundry. I really appreciate your comments on my stuff as it helps me to find what is readable and whats not. Also you have an inate ability to find any discrepencies. Much better than some who just say 'That,s great', and nothing else. Many thanks. once again.


  • condor gold member
    October 17, 2008
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    I'll be happy when this poem comes back so i can read it.


    • rbruce gold member
      October 17, 2008
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      Hi Condor, It's back now. I forgot I had taken it out.

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    February 22, 2008
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    • rbruce gold member
      February 23, 2008
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      We shall travel together, its a wide road, with room for all. Thank you.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    February 20, 2008

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    That's beautiful!!! Oh I just love people, all different people.. I find them all fascinating and wonderful.. everyone has a story to tell and leaves an imprint on us!

    This was such a cool piece I love it!

    • rbruce gold member
      February 21, 2008
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      Thank you for you comments about this road. We all travel along it,and I am enjoying my journey. Thanks again. Cheers, Bob.

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