A visit to our special place I often go.
It is here that I feel you the most.
I walk the hidden path of flattened grass,
until the place where we gave to each other
the greatest of all, the gift of ourselves.
Here the birds graced us with their songs,
as the tall waterfall played it’s gentle melody,
upon the smooth rocks below.
We sat upon the cool green grass,
shaded by tall Cyprus trees.
We looked upon each other and saw into the heart.
Together we sat holding one another without speaking,
But our hearts spoke volumes to each other.
As our bodies slowly and tenderly became one,
Our hearts soared as free as the birds above.
We had become one in heart, spirit, and body.
You are still with me, and I will treasure you.
Whenever I hear the birds sing,
Or smell the scent of sweet Cyprus trees.
I will remember that day we shared,
Our greatest gift.
Author notes
This one is for you my Hetane Moodayo-Okohke, for you are still my inspiration.
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oh wow the nature in this poem is very beautiful wonderfully written. wonderful flow and detasil. It was a pleasure.
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Golden eyes 25
thanks for your kind words once again. Glad you enjoyed.
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Soothing
This poem makes me feel at peace. What a wonderful write! Bravo, my friend!!
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This is a wonderful, sentimental poem. You obviously put your heart and soul into this peice, it is so full of emotion. Beautiful...just beautiful...
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Thanks so much for your kind words my friend. I am so glad you enjoyed the poem. When my Hetane comes to me visit me in my sleep he leaves these footprints on my heart and in my mind. I must write them to give them life.
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This is absolutely beautiful
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shiptondapoet
Thanks for your generous words. so glad you enjoyed.
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BEAUTIFULLY SAD
Your words pull the tears from my heart~ such beauty and deep emotions flowing from your pen my dear Little Wind...he would love your words!!
Niaish for sharing your heart with me*love*
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Tender wolf
My sweet Sister I am glad my piece touched your heart. I had tears as I wrote as I recalled the beautiful words we spoke. Niaish my sister for giving me your heart.
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"You are still with me, and I will treasure you.
Whenever I hear the birds sing..."
Beautiful tribute to the memory of your Hetane... peace be with you my friend!
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arafura
Thanks my friend I am so glad you enjoyed. I promised someone I would try to write this piece.
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