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Go away!

Moving was NOT in my plans.
Bothering me would make another acorn
f
a
  l
    l from the tree.

Author notes

Thank you to david revoy for the picture prompt which i cant include because i have no gold membership.

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  • Valley Girl silver member
    May 20, 2008

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    Wow! A very insightful write. A touch of sadness as well. Great write.


  • crazymomma
    February 28, 2008

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    Wonderful!

    I love the use of metaphore here. I really hate moving too. The format added greatly to this poem. Good job!

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    February 25, 2008

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    This made me smile, you sure captured it perfectly well done

    Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest, wishing you all the best

    Karen


  • PoetBoy2008
    February 23, 2008
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    Great poem not bad for such restrictions lol. keep it up.


  • BeautifullyBroken42
    February 23, 2008

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    wow this is a really great poem! creative indeed! with the f
    a
    l
    l
    Great job!! good luck in the contest!


  • daviscth silver member
    February 22, 2008

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    This is a wonderful take on the picture prompt.Good luck in this contest. I think it's great! Cathy

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