Letting my oral thoughts of I want you
drip from my tongue
take pleasure as I leave a silken trail
from your lips to your groin
bodies bleeding in hot droplets of sweat
between crumpled sheets of satin foreplay
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Grinding, pulsating
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Nails grating, ripping into alert flesh
lips leaving pearls of kisses around your neck
caught on the leash of your throbbing erectness
teasing the mist of my wanton femininity
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Thrusting harder
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Our forms twist in screams of deep sexual friction
writhing in contention between pleasure and pain
your fingers become a choke chain around my neck
squeezing tight, breathing inhibited
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Intensity increased
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Riding each other in vigorous throes of fornication
maximum amount of stimulation obtained
limbs grace limbs, jerking in the release of animalistic moans
eyes closed, cum flows in ripple after ripple of orgasmic high
craving appeased, relaxed in pleasured sedation
~*~*~*~
Satisfaction reached
Author notes
"Sexy Enough?"
A contest entry
- Kinky is the Game by HaileeDear.
300 points, ended March 2, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow! This was great! The first stanza was my favorite and contained some fantastic vocabulary: between crumpled sheets of satin foreplay. That's a freaking briulliant line. I think this is one of your best; one of the best I've read anyway!
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Glad you enjoyed
~sugar~
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Way to go!
I tnink you are releasing the inner 'wanton women.' I hope it was as good for you as it was for me. Onesugar, erotica seems to bring out the best in you. You keep writing; I'll keep reading. G' day to you -
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How good was it for you then?
Just wondering.
Glad you enjoyed it.
G'day to ya. ~sweetness~
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Kinky sure is the game, that's for sure.
Think I'll visit man man tonight, Just kiddin LoL
Hot piece, very enjoyable.
Very Hot there Ms Sexy.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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sexy enough? Hell yeah! Your words just got me dreaming away... hehe!
Good form you used, and everything had a nice flow to it. Loved it!
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Thank you Snow white for your comment
I am delighted you enjoyed it
~sugar~
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Commenting again for the group sis
still a HOT piece.
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How did this piece get up here?
Cheers sis
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good jeseus opps
sug an i thought i was a sizzling mess this was hot i loved it you did a damn great job -
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After reading your link the other
Loads of
thoughts going through my head LOL!!!
here they are. Cheers hon. Appreciate you.
Love ~sugar~
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KINKY IS THE WORD, INDEED!
GOOD LUCK in this contest with this HOT piece, Sugar! Needless to say it passed me hardness test - hands down - and you know where! HE! HE! And now I'm off to play, again - as you have made me hornier than Mr. and Mrs. Toad as they do it in the road! LOL!!!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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in the road LOL!!! omg! Didn't Mr toad learn is lesson about playing in the road? (pun intended) LOL!!!
I am so glad it had it's desired effect, enjoy your play.
Love you ~sugar~ xxx
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Your writing leaves me breathless!!!
I will have to come and have lessons from you on how to write erotica, because you can make anything HOT! Your words put so much imagery in my mind, which isn't a good thing over breakfast
All the best in the contest...
Love
Sue
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I had th same thing happen to me yesterday...not a good thing over breakfast I quite agree.
Thank you for the wonderful comment and the luck in the contest.
Love ~sugar~
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Great
Really smooth and wonderful, none of it sounds awkward at all it all glows in a sweet light which is difficult with erotica for me so I give kudos!
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Thank you for such a lovely comment
I value and appreciate you reading
~sugar~
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Stunning writing Suger. Very hot. Very erotic, very sensual and powerful too. Great imagery this places in the reader's mind. Well done indeed.
Love
Wayne
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Thanks hon for reading and your brill comment
It's amazing what being ill can make you think of
Always appreciated and valued.
Love ~sugar~xx
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You win hands down
I don't know how you found that in yourself. But, that is the best erotica you have ever done. You are the mistress. I bow at your feet. I liiiiikkkkeeeddd it. Phooey, I don't know if I'll ever dig that deep.
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I surprise myself sometimes. lol
Thank you for your wicked comment
Take care
~sugar~
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Ooohhh...indeed this is SEXY enuff sis
wow, now this confirms who is realllllyyy the
just kiddin...this is so on FIRE you are getting better and better. Good luck, and thank you so much for sharing.
Ephiphany♥
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Wasn't me sis
You know me theic one
I never have anyish thoughts 
Always appreciate you to the max
enjoy reading your comments and value your constant encouragement.
How has your birthday been?
Lubb you ~sugar~
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wow. this had such amazing vocabulary. The words you used described what i would call kinky perfectly. this was gorgeous.
xoxo
pixie
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Thank you for your lovely comment
Valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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