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Limitless times

I recapitulate all my past deeds
and acts I 've done for the day

I heard that today's sins if any committed
knowingly or unknowingly in course of the day
will be carried forward to tomorrow's birth,
and if at all we don't attain salvation as preferred to
we have to necessarily bear with the times

All  the horrible sounds I made till  yesterday
are resounding in me  time and again
reminding of my future's forcible silence

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  • Cupcrazy
    February 21, 2008
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    very nice take on the prompt, great work Hugs, Bunny