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My days today

Stressful days
Unhappy Mays

Frustrated weeks
annoying shrieks

Hated girls
unlikeable males

Crushed days
Ruined ways

Depressing hours
increasing devours

I hate most days of my life
I want to be happy again
So please help me lord!
Please forgive my sins

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  • Becky1999
    February 21, 2008
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    Quite spectacular!

    I think you have a great talent everythin was perfect its just brilliant!