When I see the love sparkle
in those beautiful green eyes
I get so lost in your deepness
my heartbeat begins to rise
Lingering words upon your lips
so beautiful pink and thick
Just seem to fall away on wings
kissing my ears with soft lick
When I hold you in my arms
it is then that I feel complete
There is no one in this world
that need bother to compete
When you kiss my mouth
I just melt into your heart
This feeling is so heavenly
love you are my work of art
When we walk together
your hand slipped into mine
I’d walk with you anywhere
my love you are so divine
When we share our love
taken deeply into the night
Tangled in all our passions
the mixture turns out right
Author notes
Option: In the arms of someone.
A contest entry
- OOooo la love by Flight of Dragons.
600 points, ended February 29, 2008, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this poem is GOLDEN!!! Mastered to perfection!!! I read this and somehow taste the sweet love that you are painting in this picture.
What about a different background? This one is so gloomy?
I need to apologise, But I will have to delete your poem from my contest. You see I stipulated some rules that were not met. I have done so with so many entries and it would be wrong to single someone out.
I'm very glad you entered and that I got to read this lovely poem.
Thank you for your enry!
Becks;f -
OOoo la love! Sweet!
WOW This is a very sweet poem and very endering. I just want to read it over and over! Thanks for entering my contest!
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