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Sound

Your chin on my head,
My head on your chest,
The sound of your beating heart in my ear,
Is the sound I would do anything to hear.

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  • Lonely Christina
    April 3, 2008
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    awww its cute lol


  • Flight of Dragons
    February 21, 2008
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    Well Done

    simple yet it packs a punch. Thanks for entering the contest This is very good


  • GiveMeTheGun
    February 20, 2008

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    wow

    i wish i'd have written this.. this is exactly, EXACTLY the feeling i have right now this moment. he's on his way home from work. it's a simple poem, short, yet the meaning and the emotion in that is undebatable. i loved it.