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Summer Has Cancer

I watch the sun set
Burning the sky orange
Light slowly fades
It takes years and days

Not just days end
But a season passing
He is the summer
Darkness is December

In the fall of the sun set
He is already as a winter tree
Frail, brittle, a vision of living death
A tree that shall not see the spring of tomarrow

Wind whistles from his depth
When it gusts into a gale
It brings the pissy yellow slush
Leaving him pale white, like fresh snow

When the sun is gone
And winter has come
I will unplug the machine
Shedding icy tears

The next light of spring
When loss is still fresh
Will have lost some glory
For my world will be colder

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With you heavy on my mind Dad. I love you.

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  • Soulful Woman silver member
    February 20, 2008

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    What an inspiring description of how you are feeling about your father. There is such sadness within the stanzas. Beautiful writing.
    Soulful Woman


  • RandonBrandom
    February 20, 2008
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    I like it. i dont get it but i suppose that's why i like it.