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In the Shadows

Feeling the heartache
Entombed by the grief
Through today and tomorrow
There is no relief

Why, why why?
Must this go on
I think as I cry
Becoming even more withdrawn

Days becoming nights
Nights becoming terror
Who turned out the lights?
This darkness bearer

Watching their felicity
Deep in terrible regret
Trapped in the simplicity
Forever in this debt

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  • checkXyesXjuliet
    April 24

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    this was not very happy was it? i think that there are a lot of metephors and hidden meanings in this. but i liked it a lot.

  • Nighttime angel
    March 17

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    this poem paints a scary & very eerie picture. I did see the picture that you wrote this poem for.. I think that you did an outstanding job with the prompt.. there us lots of sadness, and fear through out this write.

    thank you for entering & good luck

    kat

  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 4

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    This is very good dear good luck with it in my sissies contest


  • MassMan silver member
    February 20

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    I liked your poem and the rhyme. And the tone and feel of it. You did good with this one!

    David


  • Valley Girl Greeters member
    February 20

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    Excellent use of the prompt and great background! Best of luck in the contest, and thanks for commenting on my write as well.

  • ShadowsMidnightRose
    February 20
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    Wow...
    I love how you have written this..It displays the picture very well..Good luck!!!

  • Ashleigh London
    February 20

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    That was great. You really did a fantastic job with the rhyming and the emotion. I think this goes brilliantly with the picture. Thank you for entering and good luck.
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