Treacherous demons
plagues to my slumber
dreams, no doubt thou have come to encumber
A pronounced coward fearing remorse
drawn to insomnolence as final recourse
Madness inevitable sure to prevail
delusions effuse in ghastly detail
revealing secrets of a conscience in ail.
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I liked this.
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I like the third line of the 1st stanza.
The vocabulary is very hooking, it makes me want to see more.
Ghastly Detail,
I really like this poem, for the fact that it flows and still rhymes, the rhyming seems almost, a mistake.
Great write.
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revealing secrets of a conscience in ail!
demons of the night...great background and perfect poem
for the night terrors description too! or the stalking
of decision i don't want to do too! lol
ears/Seattle
feast of a poem, well done! well done!
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ohhh beatifully dark, like -pure- dark...
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Very dark and haunting. Great rhythm and interesting word choices, with an old-world feel. I'm left to wonder at what is troubling your conscience, what secret you are hiding from yourself.
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This was short and to the point. Wonderful!! Thanks for putting it on.
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This is a great write with such raw and dark emotion. I loved the word choice you have used, it makes this poem very powerful. WEll done.
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Held my breath till the end of the poem.
A deviously wonderful dark poem.
Good choice of background...x
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Interesting piece. Nice and haunting.
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I've always been a sucker for the more lexiphanic side of language. I mean, encumber, such a delicious word. That aside, this poem is quite captivating. Great work.
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Holy Pancakes
I like this pirce very much the rhyme and flow are so presice I love it. I can help but wonder, what was your muse for this piece? I am more than surprised with your talent and I can't wait to read more from you. you are a great poetess
well done
-Dustin-
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Wow...reminds me of medieval times...a vicious write.
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