It was on her lunar hip
she placed her passing ship
in a moon beam the size of Miami
in the shape of a silver sliver...
Author notes
totally lunar, man...
A contest entry
- Honor the Moon/ Semi Quickie by Ithica.
525 points, ended February 21, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Repeat! Repeat!!!
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The man in the moon as he sails the sky, is a very wonderful skipper but he made a mistake when he tried to take a drink of milk from the dipper
Bravo on this Ed,
galfalfa
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oh my!!!
I love this! LOL
very well done! how creative you are!!
congrats on the shiny silver!
this rocks...
Blessings! Tammy
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This has a kind of sensual feel that is very appealing... Thank-you for entering!
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this is absolutely beautiful
and a bit sexy- it feels all comeonie.. with the hips and passing ships and
moons over miami.. a bit onenightie maybe?
i like it a lot..
excellent brevity
m
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Yes, a lovely write for this eclipse tonight. No need to add anything more. Great picture and presentation too.
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It's getting there even as I write this. On such a clear night here it is so easy to see. You've done a great job.
Kelli
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