Lost in a place where none of this is mattering
All emotions frozen on this cold winter day
<"Where I could find moments blown upon fields of yesterday
My thoughts left stirring in tomorrow’s whispered gathering">(authors prompt)
Alone in this cold and desolate place
Nothing here but my past full of mistakes
All the good has left no trace
Hidden behind all the merciless hate
My life slowly fading to gray
My soul torn apart by each passing second
Not religious but I kneel and pray
This could be a holy message
To turn myself into a better person
One who will give to others
With no need for mortal worship
Only the goal to fix angels broken feathers
This is my new mission
One that is righteous and true
I’ve got to ease mans aggression
And help mankind start anew
A contest entry
- Quickie, Prompt, No Line Limits :) by Cupcrazy.
550 points, ended February 22, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like your piece but you were only supposed to use my two lines as inspiration and yet you have used them in the piece as your own, please remove them or put them into brackets and denote that they are my lines, I will be back to reread.
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WOW!!!!!!! This one made me think pretty deep.. I like it alot.
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