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Influences

To change the world
around you
you must first
change yourself

Being something other than yourself-
leaves you
in a world you didn't mean to make
you don't feel like you belong.
Once your eyes are open
you being to realize
you were under the influence

To change a life
You must change the way you live it
And show someone else
that it's not a waste of time
So they want to be alive
And be the influence.


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I don't really know what this is...but I wrote it and posted it.

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  • ElvishWind
    February 25, 2008

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    Oh my GOD!!! I think this is my favorite out of all of your poems. You are so right! And the way you express it, it's just aMaZiNg! rock on!

    ~Alyssa~