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Beach comber.

When the memories are just blurred dashes,
footprints in your mind,
that every few years a wave comes,
and creeps up into the sand,
deadly,
washing everything away.

To start anew you say,
but to forget everything,
from everything!
is a new form of suicide.
You kill yourself with each swallow,
each sip.

I am happy to dwell in my past,
let the memories overwhelm me in fits of terror,
or may I be gripped by laughter.
I delight in the sad memories,
because they make me who I am.

With each pain comes a new joy,
because I have lived, I have learned,
and I have grown stronger.
But my love,
The thing with forgetting is,
you never know what your missing out on,
until its gone.

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  • Cupcrazy gold member
    February 22, 2008
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    Lovely take on the prompt _


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    February 21, 2008
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    Please submit your entry, I will be closing and judging this in the morning, thank you