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some kind of cure

These are the unfit teeth
Which gnaw and grip
At all the untied ends

My time forced a smile
Onto me, passing it off

As some kind of cure
As some kind of pass time
Thought timely

These are the unfit things
I give to you and me

These are the knives
And blades that make
The skin sing

Make the skin peel free
Make the skin cross a room

My time forced a frown
Onto me, passing it off

As some kind of cure
As some kind of pass time
Thought timely

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  • Trystane
    February 20, 2008
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    WOW

    Really vivid and powerful! Moves like a snake and shivers the spine. Potent stuff.