Welcome to my chamber
Enveloping darkness closes tight
Feeling nervous are we?
Good! You won’t put up a fight
See me in my splendour
Tight black leather and black lace
You came here for a reason
I will put you in your place!
Handcuffs - hard cold steel
Blindfold tight across your eyes
Quickly I remove your clothes
Ahhh yes, I see my prize
No boundaries now between us
For your want is clear to see
Taunt tender flesh it beckons
Yet I hear your woeful plea
‘Please be gentle Mistress’
SILENCE SLAVE!! Be at my will
Collar slips around your neck
Now I know you will sit still
I shall enjoy you at my leisure
Playful licks, then harder BITE
Hot wax dripping on your breasts
You scream with such delight
Stiletto heel now on your shoulder
It is time to do your part
I direct you for my pleasure
Heavenly fires your lips impart
I purrrr with satisfaction
You moan loudly in reply
A river flowing from me
Pours to you in great supply
Once my needs are met
I kneel swiftly at your feet
Your body straining for me
I enjoy this tasty treat
Taking time with my meal
Tongue issuing all my tricks
Nails digging in your thighs
Sweet torture with my whips
Clawing hungrily at your skin
Leaving track marks where I’ve been
You whimper and you tell me
It’s the best time you’ve ever seen
You finally let it go now
Releasing all your heightened lust
Off my knees directly
Chains come off, to go you must!
Come again my dear to see me
For I always like to play
I guide you to the exit
Now I’ve had my wicked way
Author notes
hehehe
Part II:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4251731
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OMG!!! Very hot and erotic, I love it!! Once again you kept my attention from begining to end with your story, rhyme and rhythem. Lucky slave...
-Garrett
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Toss up as to which was better, but you've certainly done a great job with both of them. Your slave must just be thankful as all get out to have you as a Mistress!
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YOU WERE RIGHT! THIS ONE IS BY FAR MY FAV!!! YOU HAVE SUCH A BLUNT WAY WITH YOUR WORDS DEAR!!!! -
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These are my two bluntest writes.. I usually do sutble sensuality
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An excellent game by the way! I enjoyed every minute of it!
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So I have missed this somehow? I am certainly pleased to have read this one as well...once again I
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wow what can i say...... you so freaking hot and awesome..... omg............... speechless lol... i just love this... i wish i could write like that... awesome awesome awesome.................
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ... okie.
*exits quickly out the door* muahahahaha ...
Chase me! I dare ya! daaaaaar! heh
Steve
I dunno, I'm in a strange mood.
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Wow this was HOTT!! So my style of sensual erotica writing. Awesome imagery you displayed, it led from one thing to another.. well they do say love is pain... so why not embrace it right? lol
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Wow!
Now that puts heat into a cold stove! Such description of imagery and raw emotional desires. Excellent write in great taste. Can't wait for part 2. Yum! Don
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Well I had been warned and still I clicked and started to read...and I must say, Im very glad I did!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! I don't really know what else to say. Blistering hot!! great flow, steamy imagery, and a wonderful climax.
Encore!!! bring on the sequel!!! 
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Haha! WOW!!!!!! Thats so good! Bravo my dear...its rather hot!!
Its you again >>
haha.
xxxxx
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You were correct... this is wickedly sensual... You had me yielding to your words and begging for more (LOL). Your pleasure is mine...
Y.O.S.
Ken
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Yummmmyyyyyy...
Always wanted to try this...
You had me feeling the experience and not reading the poetry...thats something special....
Me...
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That was beautiful!
w00t!
w00t!
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Erotic
Wickedly passionate. So playfully erotic. Words cannot express how much I enjoyed this piece
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Stunning imagery all the way through this. Sensual, hot, passionate and the desire was of 'Want'. Very very
Well done
Wayne Leon
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wow
this is........ hee hee fascinating. sure is a wild fantasy. Cant say I ever been in something like this before but you made it all seem pretty real What a great adventure and fantasy to get the heart pumping. loved it
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Oh snap
I think I just realized this is the one that you told me not to read haha. I loved it and it gave me a chance to use my first emoticon 
I love how this poem builds up then releases itself at the umm climax. Great job
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WOW!
The rhyme and flow of this couldn't be better and the content is... well... HOT. LOL
You did a an excellent job, not hardcore porn but tastefull done with just enough left for the readers imagination!
The imagery is... well... HOT. LOL to say the least.
I had no idea you could write like this ya little vixen
Great Job!
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Thank you my dear friend!! Hehehe... oh what fun it was too to write this piece!
Glad you liked it! Much love to you!!!
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WOW! This is very seductive led by a dominatrix who knows how to get the most from her pet.
imagery is hot with this piece... so too the highly erotic content.
Thank-you for sharing
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very hot, sensual, perfect rhyme and flow, very in control. I loved this!
blessings,
Michelle
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HOT
Sensual deep lust
Wow! A great way to train them
Love this.....
Julie
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damn
were can i find this place? i need to meet her....loved this my friend..i got lost in the moment
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This is very hot and very provocative...and I enjoyed it soooooooo much!!! I will be reading much more of you I believe!
Az
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Thanks hun! My first foray into true erotica lol... glad you enjoyed it!
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Ahem.
And suddenly I'm in desperate need of a cold shower. The picture was beautiful and worked wonderfully with a stunning poem Well done
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Thanks!!
Yea, me too.. cold shower
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Wow
That was hot. You had me from the first line. Great read...thanks for sharing.
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Sweet And Sexy~
Hot and Spicy. A bit of this and that! :D
I see you know how to captivate your readers. ;)
Thanks for sharing you sweet soul! *hug*
Much love, Timothy xo :f:f
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Thanks!! Not my usual style, but what the heck, needed a change! hehe
Appreciate your comment!!
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such a tastey retreate commin over to your page, just what the dr ordered. wonderful job dear....Crystalgodess
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Wow...you kept this well hidden! Your good at it, intense yet subtle, which I like. Its so easy for things to become crude, you have done an excellent job here...barking orders very well..lol. Superbly penned hunni
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Hummmmmmm this is sexy and just lovely. My dear you had me at hello. lol I love it, and my so are you.
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Why thank you sweets! I'm glad you stopped by... I shall be visiting your page soon!
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well, Miss Jacks, this pleasing tale of domination has given me few ideas to tinker with. I just have someone of interest for you if I can join in the fun----
Joe
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You have done a agreat job here, very hot and erotic, tis better than the darkness, Love John
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I knew you had it in you.... My work here is done....
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That was really awsome. It had me from the first line until the last. WOW
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Hmmmm
Might be your first foray into erotic poetry, but you've been here before, if only in your fertile mind.
Well done! (goes to find his lover)
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Well....this was my first read at this type of write...I must say it was very well done, vivid images and emotions. Sensual and hot!
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WOO!!! Nice stuff here! Brilliantly written, heh I wish I could write so well! lol funny to think one guy wanted to be his mistress just because i got interested in BDSM once Nice write!
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WOW! So hott! I believe you could have your wicked way anytime you want it! Briliant imagery puts the reader in control of his or her own response. I Love it!
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ahem!!
uh well i'm at a lost....? obviously you know this was H.O.T.T. woman i don't know... l.o.l.!
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The beautiful thing about you is that you enjoy and let the people enjoy....
I wasn't so sure about you being so kinky...
but now I now...
that makes it easy for me to be kinky with you...
and let me repeat...the good thing about you is you let the others enjoy....
It's a brilliiant ertica...
very effective and powerful...
one of the kinkiest...
almost breath-taking...
just like your beauty...
Erotic kisses, sweetie!
Galaxy2
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Thanks sweetie... glad you stopped by into my chamber
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Wow
My boyfriend sent me the link to this poem, and as you can see from below he liked it (lol) and I did too.
Just... wow...
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Thank you sweets... my first foray into true erotica... just a lil bit of fun hehehe... glad you enjoyed
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WOW
Hey jackie WOW WOW WOW I don't know what else to say, *speechless*. great powerful and WOW-ing write.
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*gulp* ahem...well, this was certainly a most sensual and erotic write to say the least Jacks, and it did in fact stir my senses, (not going to say how) as all good poetry should.
mj.
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OK, now that's impressive.........
No, more than impressive...HOT HOT HOT
I thoroughly enjoyed the experience that I gained from your words, I'll be back to read more
Sue
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Why thank you Sue, I'm delighted you think so given I have read some of your amazing sensual pieces.
This I suppose is my first foray into the erotic, I do have a few more sensual ones I suppose... but just felt I had to get this piece out
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Gee's Sis WoooooooooooooooooooooooooooW
That one hell of a turn on a read, majorly
Damn girl, what else is hiding inside that head of yours lol
Cin
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Glad it delivered as it was supposed to sis!! Ohhh.. my head is a very strange place I assure you
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Pervvvvv
Haha its actualli really good. I like
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Steaming...........youve done this before lol....great write, very erotic and leaves an indelible mark upon the mind, much like the whips I suspect......
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Hot!
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Kick ASS!!
AWESOME WRITE!! this is VERY EROTIC!! love the imagery! S&M! love it! super kinky!! If only I never pulled my back.... damn! I'll have to re-read this when I am 100% lol,!
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LMAO!!!! Yes hun... can't perform in my chamber with a pulled back mwahahahahaha *jokes*
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Well done, poetess...? Mistress? Temptress? You've had your wicked way with my mind, now I must find something to grind. LOL One.
Dez
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*cough* RAWWWR *cough*
*wipes fog from laptop screen* is it hot in here or just you....
I knew we were in for a ride when you told me you were writing this.... most awesome...
I think you're mostly bad with a little good
Love you
Karen
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Why hun... you know that I'm an
... opps my halo just slipped around my neck and is choking me!!! hehehe
Love you back
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Damn girl. That was amazing. I like this naughty side of you... didn't think you could pull it off, but that was foolish, seeing as how you are one talented poetess. Flawless job baby doll. Keep it up.
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You are too kind my dear!!! hehehehe... I'm a good girl really.. with just a lil bit of
Thanks hun!
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OMG!!! i am speechless and i cannot make a proper comment to this piece as im sure there is a rating to the comments lol.....Very hot, very steamy, oh i am still hung on the poem as a memory in my head....i can see everything played out purrrfectly.
I would love to come back and play....i wanna be next....great job sweets!
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damnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!
*sits in shock* ummm hahaha i actualli sat here laughing for most of it coz i was like...OMG lol there is nothing i can say...
haha indeed 2 can play that game so can 3..or 4...LMAO jack and stella wuld luv to join in im sur!!
mistress you hav ur slave in subjection i will come again to see you....dont u worry bout that
VERY hot and erotic hun (but i did not doubt it would b hehe)
signed
ur humble slave
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Ahhh yes, you have been warned slave!!
Jack and Stella are always welcome my dear into my chamber!
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*heeds warning*
well we should invite them next time, shouldnt we?? jack will b one lucky boy hahaha
im sure everyone is jealous of our fun
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