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daffodils

Daffodils has the yellow petals.
Flowers blooms in the early of spring,
a early beautiful spring flower.
It's spring, what it will bring.

The spring rain gently falls
it makes more of the flowers.
The tulips and lilies are in bloom,
and it's refreshed after the shower.

When we see the daffodils
the wind blows, daffodils sways
to show to us it is also happy
that it is the spring day.

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  • Chrissy03
    March 2
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    Thanks.

  • BellaD
    February 29

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    Sweet!

    This is very lovely. I like the image of the daffodils swaying in the wind. They are my favorite flower! Thanks for sharing this. Keep writing.

  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    February 20

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    Beautiful poem about one of my favorite flowers--the daffodil--lovely in beginning of spring, which I think we are all ready for!


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    February 20

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    Excellent write Dear I like this poem and I like Daffodils Keep up the great work.

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