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Evening.


"Aaaammmmaaannndddaa!!"
Echo's through the
Empty staircase,
Down the hall penetrating
My drowsy mind.
Awaking me from my never ending
Stream of knowledge.
The pages continue to turn
As the night falls.
The smell of the evening rain trails
In the window with the
Soft breeze.
The call of my mother sounds again.
Reeling me back
To reality -
Dinner is ready.

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  • first forgotten
    March 13, 2008

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    this is really neat! i know neat is lame, but i like the word. so its neat! i like the flow and the over all story in it. nice write, great talent!