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Friendship is a Quaity........

  Will i die in despair with no air , will  just my friends be there?
It quite rough with no one beside you, not here, not there, not anywhere. Friendship is the most important thing
other than family you shoudn't back down from challenges when you know that soon it will all be gone ,
depending on you're age you might not even get to learn how ride your first bike or get to see your children
get married.
      Things happen and we don't know why.We cry.We always will it might not be on the out side you might
just be weaping on the inside just remember that no matter what happens i will always be there for you because i love you
and i will always know  that you will always be there for me even if one of us dies we will be, together, for ever.Friendship.

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  • myrataal silver member
    June 23, 2008

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    Life is a simple complexity ...

    and a beautiful and sorrowful journey of joy.

    It has its paradoxes ... We should rejoice and be focused on what we do out of free will and own choice, instead of mourning our losses, due to foolish actions.

    Do you know, I still can't cycle for I fell on concrete when I was little, injured my leg and hands seriously and never again got up to ride? But the wondrous thing is: do you know I do not care to cycle, for I fly? And at least I saw my one of my five children married, should I die now.

    Love to you, Precious Soul.

    Thank you for writing lovely words.

    Myra


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    May 24, 2008

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    yes i liked it. you may not be together, probably not . but you will grow on , from these feelings and friendships, carry on writing and sharing and growing ...peter