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brown raven(poe boy remix)

once upon The Blok ,so dreary
I pondered my hearts dark And weary
QAINT And cuious memories
like some old 4Gotten lore
wen sudenly there came A Rapping
As of someone Gently tapping
Tapping At my Hearts Door
"Tis some intruder" I muttered Tapping Now At My hearts Door
"Only this And Nothing More"
Ahh Distinctely I Remember
The streets were cold with Bleak December
And every crakpipes Dying embre
Wrot its Ghosts upon my floor
So Eagerly I wished 4 2morrow
So vainly I had sought 2 Borrow
Each Blunt that passed,2 kill tha sorrow
Sorrow 4 tha passing of tha RARE AND RADiNt HEART
That I once Had B4 , B4 I HAD now never more
wen some Sorrow filled sad uncertain
Feeling wraped me up just like a curtain
thrilled me and filled me with fantastic terrors never felt B4
wen once Again I hurd the tapping
TAP,TAP,TAP
I hurd it tapping, tapping loud at my hearts door
"WHO THA FUCK IS OUT THER TAPPING"
I say Tapping now at my hearts door
"say now or leave 4evermore"
wen from across the Block, with No start or stay she
pushed her way through Lord and Lady
And perched herslelf on my left shoulder
just above my hearts door
perched and sat and nothing more
upon my shoulder this brown raven
perched and sat and nothing more
Alas she sat this stately raven
on the blok,neither dark or craven
tapping now on my hearts door
wen in my ear this brown raven
whispered "yor a whore"
"WUT!" I said "say you upstarting"
"Be these words our sign of parting"
"Take thine beak from out mine heart
and get thine Ass from out my door"
Qouth Brown Raven "yor A whore"
"Be THEE BIRD OR Beast" I said in anger
"I MAY SEEM Quite strange but you are stranger"
"4 each gurl i bang brings me close 2 danger"
"And danger kills tha sorrow more"
Qouth Brown Raven "yor a whore"
"who are you that no's me so dearly"
"with those three words you say so Queerly"
"your words hurt my hart but not nearly"
"As the sorrow that darkens my hearts door"
Qouth brown Raven "yor A whore"
mine eyes they are dark with all the seemings
of a demons that is dreaming
all the lite ther gone,no longer streaming
they cast only shadows onda floor
and my blakend soul from beaneath these shadows
shall b lifted nevermore
qouth brown raven "yor a whore"
so i flew with this brown raven
2 sum place,wur we stoped an stayed in
so far away from wur the madmen play in
alone she sat me on tha floor
perched an sat me onda floor
perched and sat me on tha floor
perched an sat and nothing more
i took shelter there beneath hur feathers
her tiny wing had cut the tethers
released the bonds an chains an fetters
that held my hart so sore
kut threw the locks of mine harts door
qouth brown raven"yor a whore"
"These words you speak"said i so faintly
"they may b true 4 im far from saintly"
"but darker now you wish 2 paint me"
this wretch upon your floor
"darker with tha words u speak,2 me upon yor floor"
qouth brown raven "your a whore"
"i do not kare ,wut you say now raven"
"4thers never bin a place ive laid in"
"were all my sorrows have bin stayed in"
lost somewere beyond the door
gone from out my mind and soul,away from my hearts door
is this magik or am i dreaming
4 i am 2 evil far from reedeeming
i have murrderred tha blok with my drugg dealing
at the front lines of tha war
there is no hope for such as me,my heart died in tha war
beating still 4evermore
her now i lay with all these feelings
that grip mine hart and send it reeling
i cannot stand im stooped to kneeling
from the power she holds,on my hearts door
her tiny wings have swung it open
all tha locks have hit the floor
broken and shatterd,from my hearts door
gone from mine harts door
qouth brown raven"yor a whore"
lost now in a trancelike dreamstate
i wishh 4 2morrow 2 arrive at some later date
i grip on tha moon and tell her please wait
close not now mine hearts door
please let me stay here,now
and 4evermore
qouth brown raven"yor real stupid fat cow"

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  • Jade-
    February 22, 2008

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    This is an interesting poem I liked the flow in some parts, but in others it seemed to go off a bit.

    Thanks for entering my contest, and good luck.

    xxx


    • beautiful-sadness
      February 22, 2008
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      excuse me. YOUR contest?

      this is mine.

      • Jade-
        February 22, 2008
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        What the hell are you talking about? If you look, this poem is also in MY contest. Wow, you're rude aren't you. Blimey.