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REALiTY is but a shared iLLUSION

When night holds fast you can truly see
Desires wreak their havoc; willingly set free
They breathe fire into the soul, ignite the mind.
Illuminating the way, they’ll not be left behind.

Time has no meaning; not that you can tell.
It seizes none too boldly; casting you under its spell.
Engulfed with passion, enriched with a glow
Day shines bright outside and you don’t want to go.

And when you finally do wake, nothing may be as it seems.
But what is life after all, but a dream within a dream?




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  • zeroabyss
    November 14
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    I so often wish I could reside inside of those dreams that make me not want to leave my fortress of solitude (aka under the sheets of my bed in the haven of my room).

  • writer-not-poet
    February 20

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    I loved this one! You used lots of striking words that really makes one pay attention. The imagery that the words inspire is very effective towards the meaning.