Domesticated
Obedient to a fault
God's gift to a man
Author notes
this haiku is written in the traditional 5-7-5 haiku style. it has an acrostic element as well. hope this works for you...peace
A contest entry
- D...is for dog. by DogFish.
850 points, ended March 1, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Joy you bring to soul of mine ogreat baldone, always as you do!
Can't
Argue
To much with that...cat : )
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This is a wonderful description and the ending line is very true. I live alone with two dogs who are my loyal and happy companions and it is true that they are certainly a gift. Love this haiku on one of my favorite subjects. Hope you are doing well, Terry. How is life going?
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hey MAry!, good to see you. Thanks for the praise on this one, and yes dogs are truly a gift- we have three now
. Life is good , no complaints- none that anyone will listen to anyway
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three thumbs up!
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